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Zwei Manner Anmelden

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My finished trade with *ladybat ( :iconladybat: ), of her character Zwei Einhorn ( [link] ) for my Mr. Face.

Ach. About five hours total work went into this. Half an hour on the sketch (I kept changing the background - first he was sitting in a bedroom, then the chair came in and he was floating on some clouds, then he was surrounded by broken gears and cogs, and I ended up with the screens), an hour and a half for the inking, and three hours to color.

I'm really proud of this one, though. The coloring turned out really well, and I heart the costume I created. To be honest, I stole a lot of it from the character Ryuutaros ( [link] )from the Japanese TV show 'Kamen Rider Den-o'. Well, at least the dark purple long coat and white gloves... The rest of his costume is pretty much just taking his armor and making it less 'Megaman-y'. I didn't really exactly do that, but just tried to work a lot of his design into it - like the wing shoulder pads and the yellow motifs on the chest plate and shin guards. I actually used the eyedropper tool to get the exact colors Ladybat used on Zwei, like for the hair, the skin, the horn, etc.

I'm not sure why he has a sword. I was trying to make him video-game-villain-y, since Mr. Face is obsessed with video games, and even put himself into the one he created as the hero, Alpha. (See, he's the silhouette in the door way - that's actually the Face Kadas picture - [link] though it's obscured by smoke). I'm not sure why Zwei has a katana. > < It just sort of fit.

The title... ah, the title. In english, it reads 'Two Men Enter'. Yeah, yeah, as in Thunderdome, 'Two men enter, one man leaves'. I translated it into German as a pun, since Zwei (two) is the name of the character I drew. Blah.

Anyways, the line art of this can be found here; [link]
Ladybat's half can be found here; [link]

Zwei Einhorn (c) *ladybat
Art and Mr. Face (c) Myself
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maXVolnutt's avatar
What?! An art trade without the presence of OLCADAN?! You cur!

It looks quite good, but the presence of lighted elements in the background seems like it should have more affect on the character. You've become very good with such effects, so I'd think you'd want to use them. Remember, light bounces around in reality, so always be aware of secondary light sources. The posing is quite classic, but your anatomy on the thigh is questionable. The muscle groupings on that area of the leg are pretty complex, so it's always good to have a reference when putting them in (besides one's self). The only other thing is while al the steam is a good effect, it seems a bit opaque, like it's a big solid cloud sittign right next to him. It makes it a bit difficult to identify the figure in the background as a figure at all.

So, overall, just work on putting more OLCADAN! into it and things should be perfect. ...ly owl.